My feedback from elevator pitch two was very positive, I know that I can still do a lot better and make them a little longer. I get nervous and either talk too fast or repeat myself so I definitely think I still have a lot to work on. In this pitch I tried to dress nicer and talk slower.
Amanda i think you did everything right except time. it should be 1 minute long speech but yours is only 37 seconds. Try to talk more about your idea in detail. Also, liked your idea which helps students and saves their time and money. Since i didnt watch your previous elevator pitches, i dont know details of your idea, but i hope your idea will be successful. here si link to my page http://sardorbek07.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I really like your idea. Especially the fact that students who have cars and hassle with parking on campus do not have to leave their spot. You're improving on an already popular venture, which is brunch or breakfast spots. Also, I think you're on to something making it close to campus, being that their aren't too many breakfast/brunch spots on campus apart from Bagels & Noodles. Good job and here is my post http://stefanent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/my-unfair-advantage.html
Amanda, you did a good job on the elevator pitch and your idea can be helpful to improve wait times. You did seem a little nervous and talked quickly, but I have said to others, it's okay! Usually people understand why you are nervous, as camera tends to put pressure on people. You could lengthen the pitch next time though, but you always have room for improvement. Check out my own elevator pitch at http://kingkion.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
Amanda
ReplyDeletei think you did everything right except time. it should be 1 minute long speech but yours is only 37 seconds. Try to talk more about your idea in detail. Also, liked your idea which helps students and saves their time and money. Since i didnt watch your previous elevator pitches, i dont know details of your idea, but i hope your idea will be successful.
here si link to my page
http://sardorbek07.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Amanda
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea. Especially the fact that students who have cars and hassle with parking on campus do not have to leave their spot. You're improving on an already popular venture, which is brunch or breakfast spots. Also, I think you're on to something making it close to campus, being that their aren't too many breakfast/brunch spots on campus apart from Bagels & Noodles. Good job and here is my post http://stefanent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/my-unfair-advantage.html
Amanda, you did a good job on the elevator pitch and your idea can be helpful to improve wait times. You did seem a little nervous and talked quickly, but I have said to others, it's okay! Usually people understand why you are nervous, as camera tends to put pressure on people. You could lengthen the pitch next time though, but you always have room for improvement. Check out my own elevator pitch at http://kingkion.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
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