So, the feedback I received on my last pitch was very kind and they agreed with me that we need a new brunch place in Gainesville. The commenters also like the name I came up with. However, I think they were too kind as I think I did poorly in that pitch. This one is a little better and hopefully I will do better on my third pitch as well.
Hi Amanda, As the saying goes, women (I am paraphrasing here) love brunch! I am in West Palm Beach and we have a ton of brunch spots to choose from, so I am sorry that you all have so few. I would agree here should be at least one more open in your area. Anyway, if you care to check out my video it is below. http://nicholeent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Amanda, While I cannot personally say I am a "brunch person" I am a fan of food that is within walking distance as my own vehicle is less than reliable and I simply enjoy walking places. One suggestion I would make is to go into more detail about the type of food you will be serving as I do not know what brunch food entails.
You can check out my second elevator pitch here: http://llogsdonent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I would love to have a brunch spot close to campus! This kind of restaurant will be great for Sunday mornings. Long lines can be very annoying. Your elevator pitch was very well done. Check out my post: http://tylermurton.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Amanda, As the saying goes, women (I am paraphrasing here) love brunch! I am in West Palm Beach and we have a ton of brunch spots to choose from, so I am sorry that you all have so few. I would agree here should be at least one more open in your area. Anyway, if you care to check out my video it is below.
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Hi Amanda,
ReplyDeleteWhile I cannot personally say I am a "brunch person" I am a fan of food that is within walking distance as my own vehicle is less than reliable and I simply enjoy walking places. One suggestion I would make is to go into more detail about the type of food you will be serving as I do not know what brunch food entails.
You can check out my second elevator pitch here: http://llogsdonent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I would love to have a brunch spot close to campus! This kind of restaurant will be great for Sunday mornings. Long lines can be very annoying. Your elevator pitch was very well done.
ReplyDeleteCheck out my post: http://tylermurton.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html